the rough storyboard

this is the rough storyboard for the final film. i try to use the abstract way to tell this story. it begins with 'YIN YANG' which means every two opposite things,but alive rely on each other. for example, the man and women, they are the two opposite people in the nature. however, the human developing needs man and women rely on each other to achieve it. so many things like this in our life, such as day and night, sun and moon, and so on. This just the idea for the film. i will do some develop in the drawing process.

After present this to others, i got these problem need to solve:

first, it need add more shots angle, most of the shots in the storyboard are too flat.

second, it still need to add more dynamic shots and movement to rich the visual effect.

third, it would be better add more shot to keep the story line clear.